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Question by You’re gonna love my nuts!: Should I divulge my past struggle with alcohol abuse on a college acceptance essay?
I’m returning to school after not having been in school for thee years. I did get an associates degree (after several years of going to several community colleges). My GPA is substandard, and my transcript littered with multiple withdrawals and failed courses. A big problem I had was that I had a serious drinking problem and suffered from severe depression.

However, I got treatment and have not had a drink of alcohol since 2008. I do have a degree, though my GPA is garbage. Would it be wise or unwise to divulge my struggle with alcohol and depression on a college acceptance essay? Even if I have goals set for myself and have moved beyond these struggles, would it hurt my chances of getting in?

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Answer by ♥ eѕѕвee
Sometimes you have to take that risk. You have to show yourself to the colleges, being compeltly open and honest with who you are and why you are there, and why they should give you a change.

Say it in a way that shows personal growth.

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Question by daz z: What’s a good title for an essay on the effects of alcohol on the body?

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Drunken Cells (said quickly it sounds like Drunk – In Cells)

Pickled Brains

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Question by Troubled: What’s a good title for an alcohol essay?
I am making a persuasive essay on the effects of alcohol and alcohol abuse/alcoholism and why to stay away from it… I need a great title for it.

I used a lot of facts and an anecdote on a person who might be addicted and the side effects he’s going through, if it helps.
Thanks Bob, come on, more answers please :)

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“Death in a Bottle”

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Question by Shyanne: im setting up an argumentative essay on why alcoholism should be consider an disease i don’ t know how 2 start
I trying to find out what should be my 3 major points. Im not traditional college student im 44 years old and this is becoming very frustrating

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Answer by Short3Gears
Good luck… you’d be better off arguing that it is NOT a disease. It is (IMHO) an addiction like drugs and cigarrettes and food…
It runs in the family – that is one excuse for calling it a disease… but it is more monkey see monkey do and lack of will power…

30 year alcoholic 1 years dry and happy about it… no meds, no AA, just motivation… Motivation does not cure disease… People that quit drinking… just that… they quit… you can’t quit a disease. AA is a good thing for many – it helps them quit with support and helps with motivation – it does not CURE anything physical and a disease is physical – even a mental disease has physical causes… alcoholism does not – unless you find proof and prove me wrong… there is no proof that I am aware of and I have studied it while trying to quit myself…

As for the other posters’ responses so far, you can NOT call the resulting sickness and DT’s part of the “disease” of alcoholism… they are the after effect – not the original problem of drinking tooo much.

Point #1: it is an addiction. Like cigaretts and drugs and food. So far I have never heard anyone say smoking tobacco is a disease.
Point #2: It runs in the family. Daddy drinks, son drinks. Or it ’skips’ a generation – Granpa died an alcoholic, daddy over compensated and did not drink, and the next generation went overboard not learning how to drink proper from daddy (ok, I admit that is a long shot explanation ;)
Point #3: People QUIT drinking. Diseases can not be ‘quit’.
Point #4: Detox, meds to combat drinking, therapy, AA, liver failure, brain damage ARE ALL causes of over drinking. They ARE NOT the cause of drinking (alcoholism). – smoking causes lung cancer and heart disease – is smoking a disease…. ?? and people also quit smoking… etc etc etc…

ps. I sound angry about this so called alcoholic ‘Disease’ because I am angry. I made it through computer systems engineering while being an alcoholic. I paid for my own schooling. I tried AA. There were other alcoholics in AA ONLY because they had to register going – Why??? Because they filed with Massachusetts as ALCOHOLICS and GOT FEE TUITION, FEES, and ROOM and BOARD under the guise of having a DISABILITY – DISEASE – ALCOHOLISM… I call that pure BS… I made it on my own, they could have too… and I didn’t quit drinking till 10 years later… (not sure when/if they did… but they said they were in AA and NOT drinking… but STILL had the “disability”!!!!

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request JonDollar : What are some good topics to cover in an essay alcoholism? best answer: Associate

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debt with drunken drivers. If it ever be overcome, if something should happen when one person was killed. Give answer to this question below!

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